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Dear lord...

I haven't laughed so hard at a flash in a long time.

You have a very recognizable drawing style. The animation is pretty well done. One of the things I like about seeing new things from you is that there are (sometimes more subtle) hints of improvement in every flash. I especially liked the parts where everything was gray and blue for dramatic effect.

The voice acting was great for the most part, but I thought the last thing he told him on the radio sounded a little anticlimactic, like he was casually telling him his shoes were untied or something.

The music is obviously all great and fits perfectly, considering the theme.

"wtf is that thing?"

Seriously, what the fuck are those things?

That was terrible

You're terrible. This is terrible. It's terrible.

Terrible.

On an unrelated note, the audio was quite unintelligible, but the animation itself was purty gud.

Well fuck.

Now I wish I was less of an asshole and didn't tell you to fuck off when you asked me if I wanted to do voices.

I was absolutely enjoying this, sometimes simplicity is the best route, and this is definitely one of those cases. The lack of sound or music, as someone else suggested, is nice because it helps you concentrate.

I found, however, that the easiest way to play it legitimately is to just stop focusing on anything and let your eyes glaze over. While it kind of looks like you're having an acid trip, it's much easier to see where the openings are this way.

There is at least one really simple way to cheat, though. I just kept pressing X really fast to kind of give it a choppy slow motion effect, which was making hard difficulty substantially easier until I accidentally fumbled over the Z and X keys and lost at 16-1700 points.

All in all, it's fairly entertaining and I loved the way you made Lunatic difficulty harder, it was unexpected; but then, you always have some sort of clever twist in your submissions and it is definitely one of the appealing aspects of your work.

Not too bad, my man.

It was pretty fun at first, but it got a tiresome fairly quickly. I think, maybe, to break up the monotony a bit, some sort of different event every four quarters or something of that nature would have been nice.

I did find it somewhat humorous to go into different difficulties, expecting it to just go faster or something, and find that the smashy thing was smaller.

As it is, it's pretty fun while it lasts, and quite frantic a bit later on, but it could really do with something a little more.

Pretty good.

I liked it, actually. The controls were somewhat sluggish, but it's a very original idea. It's also pretty hard in single player to control the hero and type the correct keys at the same time.

You have lyrics and there's obviously meaning to your words, which is a nice change of pace, especially on this site. Your flow is often hit and miss on your songs, though. Some times you're right on target and you're on beat for a couple bars, but then you try to rhyme something with too many syllables and it just falls apart for a few bars until you get back on track. It also sometimes just sounds like you're talking and it happens to rhymes sometimes, and I'm not referring to the chorus.

Over all, though, I think you definitely have potential as an MC, once your flow improves a little more (and it will, no doubt) and you learn to be a little less emotionless with your voice you will be a force to be reckoned with.

Interesting.

I'm not entirely sure what to think of this, to be honest.

The beginning sounds kind of like organized chaos, if you get what I mean.

The main melody from about :30+ is quite... whimsical, I like it, but maybe it could do with another synth layered over it. As it is, it sounds kind of dull.

I like the drums and sound choice, too. It all fits together really well.

Very nice!

Everything is really good here. It all goes together well and it never stops being interesting.

Nice work, sir.

I don't know how I've never heard of this.

Everything on this looks pretty good, except the one on the right's (that one's Nagisa, right?) right foot. It looks like the end just got run over by a (space?) truck or something to that effect. It just looks too flat compared to the rest of her.

I like the shininess on her (Iczer One?)... Leather? I make no assumptions, given the description you've given of this show, for all I know, it's space rubber. Particularly on her boots and whatever that vest looking thing is supposed to be called.

I think what you did the best job on, though, was the hair, for both of them. When most people draw hair, it looks like a big, lightly detailed clump, but yours looks like.. Well, hair.

Everything is also well proportioned, and I like their expressions.

I give this one 9 out of 10 black dicks and 5 out of 5 slip 'n' slides.

Very nice.

Everything looks damn good, the only minor criticism I have is that the cracks in the road don't really seem to follow the same perspective as the lines on the sidewalk. It it weren't for the fact that the tankman is standing right on top of it, it would almost look like some kind of border.

WHAT

I CAN'T FAP TO THIS >:C